Written a poem called 'going going gone' can you give me feedback?
okay wrote this poem for school for important project so i need it to be perfect. Any improvements or tips would be helpful (ignore punctuation)
So i'm sitting here, next to your hospital bed
wondering why the hours creep by so...
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